I actually heard this on a TV station the other day. It was supposed to be a tease:
"It's a guilty verdict for OJ Simpson. He could face life in prison."
That's more like a headline. How about trying:
"The verdict's in on the latest OJ Simpson trial. We'll tell you if the jury bought his story..."
Or, assuming everyone has already heard the news...
"OJ's guilty. We'll tell you what kind of time Simpson could face behind bars and have reaction to the verdict."
Maggie L
One of the rare times I'm in the office
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